Seems like it's coming along well. I know it's work in progress but I'll still give some strong reviews only on the image:
1. I think a still image would be better. An animated/interactive image is usefull if you want to communicate something and words would not be enough nor would a still image. In this case there is no reason Nairobi and Mt.Kenya should be interactively moving.
2. The image you have now needs correct perspective and 'relative size to other objects' adjustments.
3. I think it needs abit more color and proper shading if you are only using monocrome or a small number of colors. One of the reasons the image looks odd is because light (from the Sun) is not shining from one direction as it naturally does (and this is not a SciFi website 8~))
8~) --- On Tue, 9/8/09, Gichingiri Kuria <gmail@gichingiri.com> wrote:
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